By Ajit Krishna Dasa
Hayagriva Prabhu (Howard Wheeler) was an English instructor at Ohio State University and the principal English editor of Srila Prabhupada’s original Bhagavad-gita As It Is. Because he worked directly with Srila Prabhupada, his account is highly relevant to any evaluation of the posthumous editing later undertaken by Jayadvaita Swami.[1]
Hayagriva writes:
“Daily, I try to clarify and strengthen the sentences without changing the style or meddling with the meaning, and, needless to say, this is very difficult. I soon find myself consulting Swamiji on every other verse, and occasionally he dictates an entirely different translation. The verse translations themselves are most problematical because they often differ from the word by word Sanskrit-English meanings accompanying them. What to do?”[1]
According to Hayagriva, Srila Prabhupada eventually became tired of being consulted about so many verse translations:
“Just copy the verses from some other translation,” he tells me, discarding the whole matter with a wave of his hand. “The verses aren’t important. There are so many translations, more or less accurate, and the Sanskrit is always there. It’s my purports that are important. Concentrate on the purports.”[1]
Srila Prabhupada was obviously not saying that Krishna’s verses were spiritually unimportant. He was explaining where the distinctive value of his Bhagavad-gita lay. Many English translations already existed. What the world did not have was a genuine Vaisnava explanation in the preaching line of Sri Caitanya Mahaprabhu.
What does this account tell us about Jayadvaita Swami’s later editing?
1. Srila Prabhupada knew that the translations and synonyms sometimes differed
Hayagriva directly informed Srila Prabhupada that the verse translations often did not correspond exactly with the word-for-word meanings.[1]
This was not a problem discovered only after Srila Prabhupada’s departure. It was already known while the original book was being edited.
We therefore cannot simply argue:
The translation differs from the synonyms; therefore the translation is an editorial mistake that must be corrected.
Srila Prabhupada knew that such differences existed. Sometimes he dictated another translation. At other times, he apparently considered the matter too insignificant to deserve so much attention.[1]
A discrepancy may indicate an error. But the mere fact that a discrepancy exists does not prove that one has been found.
2. The word-for-word meanings are not an infallible control text
Jayadvaita Swami frequently uses the Sanskrit synonyms as a standard against which the published translation should be measured.[2]
Hayagriva’s account, however, shows that Srila Prabhupada did not require the English translation to reproduce the synonyms mechanically. A translation may convey the contextual meaning of the verse without corresponding word for word with every English equivalent in the synonym section.
The synonyms themselves also passed through transcription and Sanskrit editing. They were not necessarily a flawless text personally finalized in every detail by Srila Prabhupada.[2]
This means that changing a translation merely to bring it into closer conformity with the synonyms may not take us closer to Srila Prabhupada. It may instead take us away from the edition he accepted.
3. The earlier manuscript cannot automatically overrule the published book
Hayagriva describes an active editorial process. He encountered problems, consulted Srila Prabhupada, received new translations and incorporated editorial decisions into the developing book.[1]
The earlier manuscript does not therefore necessarily contain Srila Prabhupada’s final decision.
It may preserve what he first dictated. That is not always the same as what he later wanted published.
The final text may contain later instructions, translations dictated after the first manuscript was prepared, suggestions made by Hayagriva and accepted by Srila Prabhupada, contextual editorial decisions, deliberate departures from the synonyms, or imperfections that Srila Prabhupada knowingly allowed to remain.
Many of the discussions behind such decisions were never recorded. A posthumous editor cannot recover them simply by placing an earlier manuscript beside the published edition and noting the differences.
4. The editor sometimes needed Srila Prabhupada’s personal judgment
Hayagriva says that he found himself consulting Srila Prabhupada “on every other verse.”[1]
That is not a minor detail.
It shows that the correct final wording could not always be mechanically deduced from the manuscript, the synonyms or the other available documents. The editor needed the living author.
After Srila Prabhupada’s departure, such consultation was no longer possible. Where the surviving sources disagree, a later editor may have no way of knowing whether Hayagriva misunderstood the manuscript, Srila Prabhupada dictated a later change, Srila Prabhupada accepted Hayagriva’s wording, the wording was chosen for readability, or Srila Prabhupada simply regarded the difference as unimportant.
This is precisely where restraint becomes necessary. When certainty is no longer possible, an editor should not replace the published wording merely because another reconstruction appears more plausible to him.
5. Srila Prabhupada rejected needless editing
Srila Prabhupada’s attitude in Hayagriva’s account is not one of editorial perfectionism. After repeated consultation over matters he considered secondary, he told Hayagriva to concentrate on the purports.[1]
This does not mean that Srila Prabhupada was indifferent to accuracy. Hayagriva specifically says that he sometimes dictated an entirely different translation. Srila Prabhupada was willing to make changes when he considered them necessary.[1]
But he did not regard every possible improvement, discrepancy or irregularity as something that had to be corrected.
Jayadvaita Swami has himself acknowledged that Srila Prabhupada opposed needless changes.[3] That restriction matters greatly in the present controversy.
A sentence may be made more literal, smoother, more grammatical, more concise or more closely aligned with the synonyms. None of these facts, by itself, proves that the published sentence should be changed.
The important questions are whether the change is truly necessary and, above all, who has the authority to make that decision.
While Srila Prabhupada was physically present, Hayagriva could ask him. Srila Prabhupada could decide whether the perceived problem was important, whether a change should be made and what the replacement wording should be.
Jayadvaita Swami could not ask him after 1977.
The warning against needless changes should therefore have led to greater conservatism after Srila Prabhupada’s departure, not less. When the author can no longer decide whether a change is necessary, the editor should be especially reluctant to alter the completed work.
Nearly every sentence can be rewritten in another way. That does not create the authority to do so.
6. Srila Prabhupada identified the purports as his unique contribution
Srila Prabhupada said that many translations of Bhagavad-gita already existed and were “more or less accurate.” What was lacking were Vaisnava purports in the preaching line of Caitanya Mahaprabhu.[1]
This establishes a clear hierarchy of importance.
The verse translations certainly matter. But Srila Prabhupada did not present the creation of a uniquely perfect English rendering of every Sanskrit construction as the main purpose of his book. The Sanskrit was printed there, other translations already existed, and reasonably accurate renderings were available.
His unique contribution was the purports.
That has two important consequences.
First, it weakens the case for extensively reconstructing the verse translations after his departure. Srila Prabhupada did not ask Hayagriva to turn every difference between the translations and synonyms into a major problem. He sometimes corrected a translation, but he did not instruct Hayagriva to pursue endless textual uniformity. He told him to concentrate on the purports.[1]
Second, it makes posthumous changes to the purports even more serious.
The purports are not merely supplementary comments surrounding the “real” Bhagavad-gita. According to Srila Prabhupada himself, they were precisely what was missing from the English-speaking world.
To alter their wording, reasoning, emphasis, quotations, theological terminology or presentation is therefore to interfere with the most distinctively authorial part of Bhagavad-gita As It Is.
There is an obvious tension in the later editing programme. Srila Prabhupada told Hayagriva not to spend excessive time refining the verse translations but to concentrate on the purports. Yet Jayadvaita Swami later revised both the translations and the purports.[1][2][4]
Srila Prabhupada’s statement cannot reasonably be used to diminish the importance of preserving the verse translations while simultaneously justifying changes to the purports. Its natural implication points in the other direction: do not obsessively reconstruct the translations, and exercise even greater restraint with the purports.
Jayadvaita Swami presents many of his revisions as restorations of material supposedly lost, distorted or obscured. The official BBT defence follows the same general line.[2][4] Hayagriva’s testimony, however, shows why the surviving documents alone cannot always reveal which differences were errors and which resulted from Srila Prabhupada’s personal participation in the original editorial process.
7. Hayagriva’s authority was direct, limited and supervised
Hayagriva worked while Srila Prabhupada was physically present.
When uncertainty arose, he could consult him. Srila Prabhupada could approve, reject, modify or completely replace Hayagriva’s proposed wording.[1]
Jayadvaita Swami’s posthumous position is fundamentally different.
Srila Prabhupada expressed confidence in Jayadvaita’s editing while he was physically present and able to supervise it.[5] That does not automatically amount to unlimited and perpetual authority to revise completed books after Srila Prabhupada’s departure.
Approval of editing conducted under the living author’s supervision cannot simply be converted into independent editorial authority once the author is no longer available.
This is one of the central errors in the defence of the revised books. Permission to perform particular editorial work during Srila Prabhupada’s presence is treated as though it authorized an open-ended programme of posthumous reconstruction.
Hayagriva was not independently deciding what Srila Prabhupada ought to have said. He was working under Srila Prabhupada’s direct authority and could consult him whenever serious problems arose.[1]
Posthumous editing based on surviving documents, memories and editorial inference is not the same thing.
8. Later decisions and the final text may overrule earlier drafts
Hayagriva says that Srila Prabhupada sometimes dictated an entirely different translation when consulted about a verse.[1]
Suppose Srila Prabhupada first dictated one translation and later gave Hayagriva another. Which one should be regarded as authoritative?
Normally, the later translation.
Suppose an early manuscript contains one wording, but Srila Prabhupada later accepts a different formulation during the preparation of the published edition. Which one should govern?
Again, the later authorized outcome.
An author has the right to reconsider, revise, replace or approve editorial changes to his earlier wording. The fact that a wording appears first does not make it his final decision.
This is especially important because many later instructions may have been given orally during the editorial process. They may never have been written into the earlier manuscript that has survived.
The manuscript may therefore preserve the beginning of the process, while the published text preserves the later result.
During the preparation of the book, Srila Prabhupada could dictate another translation, clarify his intended meaning, accept Hayagriva’s wording, approve a contextual paraphrase, abandon an earlier formulation or decide that an apparent imperfection should remain.
A posthumous editor cannot assume that every difference between the manuscript and the published edition represents corruption introduced by Hayagriva.
The fact that wording appears in an earlier source gives it genetic priority. It does not automatically give it final authorial authority.
The 1972 edition represents the completed edition published and used during Srila Prabhupada’s physical presence. The manuscript represents an earlier stage of the work.[6] The later form cannot be overturned merely because an earlier form has been discovered.
9. Some errors can be objectively demonstrated—but this does not justify thousands of changes
It would be too absolute to say that Jayadvaita Swami cannot prove that any differences in the published book are errors.
Some mistakes are objectively demonstrable. “Planet of trees”[7], for example, is an obvious error. Other examples may include misplaced purports, accidental omissions, typographical mistakes or passages that plainly resulted from faulty transcription.
But the existence of a limited number of obvious mistakes does not justify a wholesale posthumous reconstruction of the book.
The question is not whether any errors existed. Of course they did.
The question is whether Jayadvaita Swami can establish that the thousands of passages he changed were all errors, rather than acceptable editorial choices, approved paraphrases, later authorial decisions, stylistic preferences, contextual translations or imperfections knowingly accepted by Srila Prabhupada.
In many cases he cannot.
Even that, however, is not the end of the matter. Srila Prabhupada and sastra repeatedly teach that discrepancies in the works of great Vaisnava authorities may be accepted rather than corrected. Arsa-prayoga does not depend upon denying that a mistake exists. It tells us how a recognized mistake in the work of an authority should be treated.[8][9][10][11]
Srila Prabhupada explained:
“Arsa-prayoga means there may be discrepancies but it is all right.”[8]
On another occasion, speaking of discrepancies in the writings of the acaryas, he said:
“It should remain as it is.”[9]
Therefore, proving that an imperfection exists does not by itself decide what should be done with it. Some mistakes are not invitations for later disciples to rewrite the authority. They test whether the disciples are willing to accept the principle of arsa-prayoga.
Obvious errors should not become a Trojan horse for extensive rewriting. Proving that one passage contains a mistake does not establish that every difference from an earlier manuscript is also a mistake.
Nor does it prove that a later editor can reconstruct the exact words Srila Prabhupada would have chosen.
10. Proving an error does not prove the right to correct it
There is a still more fundamental issue.
Suppose Jayadvaita Swami conclusively proves that a passage in the original edition contains an error. It does not follow that he has the authority to alter Srila Prabhupada’s published book.
Two questions must be kept separate:
Is the passage erroneous?
Are we authorized to correct it in the original edition after Srila Prabhupada’s departure?
An affirmative answer to the first question does not automatically produce an affirmative answer to the second.
This is where arsa-prayoga becomes decisive.[8][9][10]
Arsa-prayoga does not ask us to deny that a mistake exists. Nor does it require us to pretend that a grammatical, linguistic or factual discrepancy is somehow materially correct.
The mistake can be acknowledged as a mistake and still be accepted and left unchanged.
Srila Prabhupada explained that discrepancies may be found in the works of recognized authorities and acaryas, but that they should remain as they are. He also warned that a later person should not try to become more learned than the authority.[9][10]
Recognizing a mistake does not give someone jurisdiction over the author’s text.
An obvious error such as “planet of trees”[7] can be acknowledged openly. Its source can be identified, and the correct meaning can be explained in a footnote, appendix, errata list or separate annotated edition.
But the original should remain original.
That is the point of arsa-prayoga. The discrepancy is acknowledged. It is accepted as part of the acarya’s completed work. It is not silently removed and replaced.
Otherwise, obvious errors become the entrance point for a much broader editorial authority. First the editor corrects what everyone agrees is a mistake. Then he changes what he considers misleading, awkward or insufficiently literal. Eventually he changes what he believes Srila Prabhupada probably intended to say.
The line between correction and rewriting gradually disappears.
Opponents of posthumous editing do not need to claim that the original books contain no mistakes. That would misunderstand arsa-prayoga and leave the argument unnecessarily vulnerable.
The stronger position is straightforward:
Yes, the mistake may be real. We acknowledge it and explain it where necessary. But we accept it as part of the acarya’s completed work and do not alter the original.
The issue is not whether Jayadvaita Swami can identify a mistake. Of course he can. The issue is why identifying it should give him the right to change Srila Prabhupada’s published book.
It does not.
Jayadvaita may be right that a particular mistake exists and still be wrong to alter the original text.
11. Jayadvaita’s method often constructs a new text rather than restoring an old one
Jayadvaita Swami presents his work as bringing the book closer to what Srila Prabhupada originally said.[2][4]
But what exactly counts as what Srila Prabhupada “said”?
Is it his first dictation? The typed manuscript? A later translation dictated to Hayagriva? A correction given orally? Hayagriva’s wording accepted by Srila Prabhupada? Or the final published edition that Srila Prabhupada used and distributed?
Once a later editor begins choosing wording from manuscripts, transcripts, synonyms, recordings and purports, while resolving the conflicts among them through his own editorial judgment, the result may be a text that never existed during Srila Prabhupada’s lifetime.[2][4]
That is not restoration in the ordinary sense.
Restoration returns a work to a form that previously existed. An eclectic reconstruction creates a new composite text by selecting among conflicting sources.
The BBT’s own account describes extensive comparison of manuscripts and other source materials in an effort to reconstruct what the editors believe Srila Prabhupada intended.[2][4] But where Srila Prabhupada’s oral decisions can no longer be recovered, the reconstruction necessarily includes the judgment of the posthumous editor.
The resulting text may be closer to Jayadvaita Swami’s theory of what the book should have been. That does not necessarily make it closer to Srila Prabhupada.
The real conclusion
Hayagriva’s testimony does not prove that the 1972 edition contains no errors. Nor is it necessary to make such a claim.
What his testimony proves is that the relationship between the manuscripts, synonyms, translations, purports and published text was far more complicated than Jayadvaita Swami’s restoration narrative suggests.[1][2][4]
Srila Prabhupada knew that discrepancies existed. He sometimes dictated new translations and sometimes accepted editorial solutions. His later decisions could supersede his earlier dictation. He opposed needless changes, and he identified his purports—not perfect English uniformity—as the unique contribution of his Bhagavad-gita.[1][3]
Some errors can be demonstrated. Others cannot.
This is exactly why arsa-prayoga matters.
Arsa-prayoga does not mean denying the existence of mistakes. The principle only becomes relevant once a mistake or discrepancy has been recognized. If there were no acknowledged imperfection, there would be nothing to accept.[8][9][10]
Srila Prabhupada said:
“The system is: whatever authority has done, even there is mistake, it should be accepted.”[10]
The statement is clear. “Even there is mistake” acknowledges the mistake. “It should be accepted” tells us how to respond to it.
Arsa-prayoga is therefore not a doctrine of material textual infallibility. It is a principle of submission to authority.
A discrepancy is identified and honestly acknowledged. Because it appears in the completed work of the authority, it is accepted and left unchanged.
Nimai Pandit taught the same principle when Isvara Puri asked Him to correct possible mistakes in his book. Nimai did not claim that a Vaisnava’s writing could never contain a grammatical discrepancy. He explained that Krishna accepts the devotional sentiment of His devotee and condemned the mentality of finding fault with such an offering.[11]
Acknowledging mistakes is therefore not a weakness in the arsa-prayoga position. It is essential to it.
If we denied that mistakes could exist, our argument would be:
Do not change the books because there are no mistakes.
One undeniable error would then appear to defeat the whole position.
The actual argument is considerably stronger:
Yes, mistakes may exist. We acknowledge them and explain them where necessary. But we accept them as part of the acarya’s completed work and do not alter the original.
Even when Jayadvaita Swami demonstrates a genuine error, he has not thereby established the right to correct it in the original edition.
The question “Is this an error?” must be separated from the question “Are we authorized to change it in Srila Prabhupada’s published book?”
The first may sometimes be answered yes. The second does not follow from it.
“Planet of trees”[7] may be openly acknowledged as a mistake. Its origin and correct meaning may be documented in an annotated edition, a footnote, an appendix or an errata list.
But the original must remain original.
If obvious mistakes are treated as permission to rewrite the text, the process will not stop with the obvious mistakes. The editor will move on to passages he considers misleading, awkward, insufficiently literal or inconsistent with what he believes Srila Prabhupada intended.
At that point, he is no longer merely preserving the work. He is reconstructing it according to his own judgment.
The decisive question is not whether a later editor can produce wording he considers more accurate. The decisive question is who has the authority to change Srila Prabhupada’s published book.
Where Srila Prabhupada personally ordered or approved a correction, it could be made under his authority. Where he did not, the published text should remain unchanged.
Errors, variants and proposed corrections can be documented transparently in a separate annotated or critical edition. In that way all the evidence is preserved without allowing a posthumous editor to replace Srila Prabhupada’s published work with a new composite text.
The original must remain original—not because we refuse to recognize its mistakes, but because we accept the principle of arsa-prayoga.
The mistakes are acknowledged. They are accepted. And they are left as they are. Hayagriva worked with Srila Prabhupada. Jayadvaita Swami works from surviving documents and his interpretation of them.
Those are not equivalent forms of authority.
References
[1] Hayagriva Dasa, Vrindavan Days, account of his work editing Bhagavad-gita As It Is with Srila Prabhupada. The quoted passage is reproduced in Jagannatha Mishra Dasa, comp., Arsa Prayoga: The Preservation of Srila Prabhupada’s Original Books, pp. 85–86. The compiled text identifies its source as “Hayagriva, Vrindavan Days.”
[2] Jayadvaita Swami, “Editing the Unchangeable Truth,” originally published in ISKCON Communications Journal, vol. 11, 2005, and republished on Jayadvaita Swami’s website on June 18, 2006. See especially the sections “How Were the Books Written?”, “Sanskrit Editing,” and “Revisions to Published Books (after Srila Prabhupada’s Departure).”
[3] Jayadvaita Swami, letter to Amogha Lila Dasa, 1986: “As you know, and as we kept in mind while doing the work, Srila Prabhupada staunchly opposed needless changes.” See also Jayadvaita Swami’s letter to senior devotees, October 25, 1982: “I tried to be conservative and not make needless changes.”
[4] Jayadvaita Swami and Dravida Dasa, Responsible Publishing: Why and How the BBT Publishes Revisions of Srila Prabhupada’s Books, prepared by the English editorial department of the Bhaktivedanta Book Trust and approved by the BBT trustees. The paper states that the later editors consulted manuscripts, transcripts, recordings and other source materials to restore material they considered lost, obscured or distorted.
[5] A. C. Bhaktivedanta Swami Prabhupada, letter to Radhavallabha Dasa, September 7, 1976: “Concerning the editing of Jayadvaita Prabhu, whatever he does is approved by me. I have confidence in him.” The statement was made while Srila Prabhupada was physically present and able to supervise the editing.
[6] A. C. Bhaktivedanta Swami Prabhupada, Bhagavad-gita As It Is, complete edition, New York: Macmillan Publishing Co., 1972. See also the conversation with Hayagriva Dasa, December 24, 1969, in which Srila Prabhupada told him regarding the Macmillan translations: “Whichever is better, you think. That’s all. You can follow this Macmillan,” and then: “Yes. You can follow that translation.”
[7] Bhagavad-gita As It Is 10.29, Macmillan edition, 1972, which reads “planet of trees.” See Jayadvaita Swami, “10.29: The planet of the trees,” in Bhagavad-gita Revisions Explained—Part 1, BBTedit.com, for the BBT’s explanation of this error and its correction.
[8] A. C. Bhaktivedanta Swami Prabhupada, letter to Mandali Bhadra Dasa, Jaipur, January 20, 1972: “Arsa-prayoga means there may be discrepancies but it is all right. Just like Shakespeare, sometimes there are odd usages of language, but he is accepted as authority.”
[9] A. C. Bhaktivedanta Swami Prabhupada, lecture on Srimad-Bhagavatam 7.5.23–24, Vrindavana, March 31, 1976: “You’ll find, therefore, in the comments of Bhagavatam by different acaryas, even there are some discrepancies, they are accepted as arsa-prayoga. It should remain as it is.”
[10] A. C. Bhaktivedanta Swami Prabhupada, room conversation with Radhavallabha Dasa concerning editing, Mayapur, February 27, 1977: “The system is: whatever authority has done, even there is mistake, it should be accepted.” Srila Prabhupada identified the principle as “arsa-prayoga” and continued: “He should not become more learned than the authority. That is very bad habit.”
[11] Vrindavana Dasa Thakura, Sri Caitanya-bhagavata, Adi-khanda 11.103–110, especially verses 105–110. Nimai Pandit tells Isvara Puri that Krishna is pleased with a devotee’s poetry even when imperfectly composed; that both visnaya and visnave are accepted when offered with devotion; and that one who finds fault with a devotee’s description of Krishna is himself at fault.
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